It’s the end of the month, and as promised I’ve posted a new story today. It’s called Old Men, and I hope you like it.
10 thoughts on “Old Men”
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It’s the end of the month, and as promised I’ve posted a new story today. It’s called Old Men, and I hope you like it.
Comments are closed.
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As always, when I read your stories, it is as though there is a video playing and I am watching a movie clip. The words you use describe the setting, people and action so well!
The narrator shows such compassion and caring. The ending shows his ability to join the world of his father. Something to remember when dealing with Alzheimer patients and family members.
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Thank you so much, Judi. I do appreciate your reading with such care.
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A wonderful and tender story Spyro.
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Thank you, Gerald. Glad you’re reading.
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Very, very good story. So many particular moments concisely conveyed. I particularly liked the push pins on the empty cork board. Such a sad image.
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Thank you, Alison. Glad you enjoyed it.
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How I love reading your texts. Looking forward to discussing it all with you soon !
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Thank you so much, Ilana! I’m looking forward to seeing you as well.
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Very evocative, Spyro – I can smell the bleach
on the floor in the Royal Vic.
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Thanks, Mike. That place is very particular but also, in its own way, pretty universal.
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